I need video feedback

I have put together a video and I need feedback. I am not looking for feedback on the guide or anything he does, just on the video and how it is laid out and put together. I am new to the camera and editing and regardless of the feedback, good or bad, please leave it here.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZolbWrNEC8

Thanks for looking... and leaving feedback...

Jamie